He asked me to post for him
(http://gyazo.com/ec9c704ef261fda2b3549d36d6e30070.png)
v2
(http://gyazo.com/b78df15b3ca67751a44e9114441053d7.png)
CnC
Quote from: ghostkid17 on January 20, 2014, 09:26:48 PM
He asked me to post for him
(http://gyazo.com/ec9c704ef261fda2b3549d36d6e30070)
CnC
Meh, i swear it's just the Render put on a blue background, then just got a smudge tool and smudged a little?. Dislike it.
Can't see it. Don't like it.
Quote from: DevilzDemise on January 20, 2014, 09:28:12 PM
Meh, i swear it's just the Render put on a blue background, then just got a smudge tool and smudged a little?. Dislike it.
.__. Dislike it , But still his first sig :P
not that bad :P
As the previous people mentioned, looks like a render in a background.
Why? Im not trying to be harsh in what Ill say, just tips onto what to do.
Firstly: Blending, the render doesn't fit well with the background, I'd suggest making the green a little bit bluer or the blue a little bit greener.
Secondly: Depth, render stands out too much, try adding some effects, or some C4Ds.
Thirdly: Composition, the background just looks empty overall, and its just a cloud filter, as I mentioned above, try adding some more stuff.
Fourthly: Focal, where's the main point in the sig? The background is too distracting to have a set point.
I suggest starting up with tutorials, lol.
He made v2 (added to first)
Give him some materials and v3 could look amazing.
Sorry, I liked v1 better. Harder to see his face in the v2. Keep it up tho, I have faith!
Quote from: kev453 on January 21, 2014, 01:01:09 AM
Give him some materials and v3 could look amazing.
Thats what i do get angrod is trying to help but it's hard. How do i add effects and stuff to make the stuff pop out.
Quote from: Cooky on January 20, 2014, 09:32:15 PM
Quote from: DevilzDemise on January 20, 2014, 09:28:12 PM
Meh, i swear it's just the Render put on a blue background, then just got a smudge tool and smudged a little?. Dislike it.
v2 gives some idea of motion atleast
replace the backround with a city stock and smudge it slightly
it will look like hes parkouring around! very cool if you ask me
Looks like you took a background and just smudged it. I guess It's decent for a first sig tho.
Quote from: Iridion on January 22, 2014, 03:02:51 PM
v2 gives some idea of motion atleast
replace the backround with a city stock and smudge it slightly
it will look like hes parkouring around! very cool if you ask me
Thanks for the help! I'll try out some new things today.
first tip on using c4ds: don't ask hawk for help
Imo you could find better results if you increase the contrast in the render and
strongly emphasize the flow (going at a NE direction).
Just realized that I've used the same render in something a while back. It might give you some ideas.
(http://i.imgur.com/qqn26HG.jpg?1)
Quote from: kev453 on January 22, 2014, 10:47:43 PM
Imo you could find better results if you increase the contrast in the render and strongly emphasize the flow (going at a NE direction).
Just realized that I've used the same render in something a while back. It might give you some ideas.
(http://i.imgur.com/qqn26HG.jpg?1)
Okay thanks :D. I'll work on it tonight.