This is my final version of the one on the gfx battle hope u guys like it =3
Wow sharpen works 0,0(no text)
(http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd504/koolwolf2/Finalversion.png)
Ty anti
whatcha think ?
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good blending
Colours go well
Nice background
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I wouldn't advise putting text in corners. It can split attention.
Not much flow
Lighting is all over the place
Have you sharpened it? That works wonders.
Overall, for you, I'd give it 6-7/10
Yeah the text is giving me a pain flow and depth would be annoyin lemme sharpen It might work brb
Pretty good, but the lightning should come from the blade. :P
Quote from: hawk5005 on December 17, 2011, 06:41:48 AM
Pretty good, but the lightning should come from the blade. :P
Yeah it should but then the placement of the render would be hard, that was my intial prob.
Needs a focal.
->Render doesn't stand out at all.
No flow, well more like an anti-flow with everything going in all directions.
Background is too chaotic.
Apparently you've been using the sharpen tool? In the future, you may want to accompany that with the blur tool, as well as with my personal favorites, the dodge and burn tools.
Some contrast would do well. Could need some flow. I would also blend it a bit more with some c4d's or fractals.