[zepher2211]

I recorded a video of me making it, mostly testing my recorder: (it's at 2x speed)

The Creation of a Signature

[hawk5005]

13:37
lul
Pretty cool sig.

[koolwolf2]

Nice sig

You made he render too eh

[Click]

Hm, looks pretty nice.

[mhj]

Nice. Keep recording them too please :3

[mo9]

the **** did u smudge without ur mouse ?
but yeah its pretty good

[Leki]

If I may be honest, its lacking focus.

[zepher2211]

the **** did u smudge without ur mouse ?
but yeah its pretty good

When I put the clip speed on the recording to 2x the mouse stayed slower than the rest of it, I was using my mouse lol.

@Leki: You can be honest lol, but please expand on what you mean, like it's not focused on the render?

@koolwolf: http://boutcheetah.zylongaming.com/index.php/topic,18311.0.html (I used the most updated version I've yet to post though)

[Yz]

Basically there's no focal. I see a sig and nothing really special to look at inside the sig. The text and effects around it are pretty good but as the render is separate from that they fail to really catch the eye's attention... just imo Focus is about one point catching your attention while still making the rest of the sig look good.

[antisickness]

If you got rid of the render, it'd make an awesome abstract sig o_O

[zepher2211]

Ah ok I get it, I'll try to add more focus to the render without making it look like shit lol

[kaos555]

render Angela so i can make a whole bunch of sigs with it until i get a outcome that is good.

[Leki]

Basically there's no focal. I see a sig and nothing really special to look at inside the sig. The text and effects around it are pretty good but as the render is separate from that they fail to really catch the eye's attention... just imo Focus is about one point catching your attention while still making the rest of the sig look good.

What TRIXIE said,

[Zack66775]

Basically there's no focal. I see a sig and nothing really special to look at inside the sig. The text and effects around it are pretty good but as the render is separate from that they fail to really catch the eye's attention... just imo Focus is about one point catching your attention while still making the rest of the sig look good.

Yea. No central point. Cool and can tell what your trying to get across but..... Make the guy stand out more or something?

[zepher2211]

I tried using a dark shade around it to make it popup, and put that in the main post, what you think

[OG ICE COLD]

I don't know much about making sigs, but i like Zepher 

[Yoshi91]

try making the render shiny compared to the dark tone of the bg. I think that would do better for focus, as your eye skips over dark, mushy, pewpy bg onto the shinee, contrasting render.

lol.

nvm. I just looked at the updated second-darker render version. I like it 
though i still would maybe change the purple color of the bg to a dark blue hue that would match with the render more, so you eye don't wander at the two main focus