try making the render shiny compared to the dark tone of the bg. I think that would do better for focus, as your eye skips over dark, mushy, pewpy bg onto the shinee, contrasting render.lol.
nvm. I just looked at the updated second-darker render version. I like it
though i still would maybe change the purple color of the bg to a dark blue hue that would match with the render more, so you eye don't wander at the two main focus