So last night i decided to get back into sig making, iunno why but yea... (imo this isnt the best i did but it looks pretty ight)
(http://i51.tinypic.com/2u73iow.jpg)
[IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2u73iow.jpg[/IMG]
enjoy bounty
Now this is spam. Maybe you should read up on what brush/c4d spam actually is. It isn't considered spam if there is flow attributes. There is no flow attributes here, unlike my team's login.
No flow. Minimal depth.
Some hints: See his mask pieces at the top?. This would have been something to look for to start flow in the BG. The render itself is fairly stagnant -- the only popping imagery is this. So, this being said, follow his head piece directions with regard to brush/c4d placement.
My critiques are harsh. Don't take offense. Improve.
explain the spam i did and maybe ill agree, what i did here was simple as #$%^. I don't go around saying "OMG I SPENT 3 HOURS ON IT ITS SO PRO". I only added 2 c4d's, some blur effects, dodge effects, and plain simple text, as said on title, SLOWLY RETURNING.
thx for opinion tho, maybe you the one who needs to read the brush/c4d spam is. maybe then you'll fix the login screen 8)
Your flow goes something of the lines of this:
left top left vertical top right. These are your line directions. Compare these line directions to your render. Is it the same? Absolutely not. The render's flow is only vertical. Now, its not to say that you can't include alternate elements that go in opposite directions, but currently, there is too much devoted to flow lines that aren't the renders flow, which makes it look poor. Also, with regard to spam, so much is thrown on there, it detracts from your focal. It isn't discernible at this point. Also, the current spam detracts from what could have been decent depth. See that bulging layer to the left of the render? It takes up too much space (due to its spam) and kills your depth because of this.
opti, you did three works and you act like experienced gfxer
imo it needs some blending and depth
Quote from: Iridion on June 28, 2011, 02:11:18 PM
opti, you did three works and you act like experienced gfxer
You don't have to be pro at graphics to understand pro technique, Iri. Huge disconnect here. Your brain fell out, lemme pick it up for you...
*steps on it*
Three works? lol. K.
whenever someone contradicts you you react like girls on period
seriously, are you nervous?
Quote from: Iridion on June 28, 2011, 02:26:50 PM
whenever someone contradicts you you react like girls on period
seriously, are you nervous?
The only time I've ever been nervous is when my high school state championship soccer team needed a goal 1 down. I don't expect you to understand pressure at that level for one of several reasons, of which, I won't mention, as you're feelings are surely just as soft as meta's.
Nervous? No. Dissapointed at the level of ignorance displayed by your statement; yes. Please, don't use the word contradict, as that infers that you've scored some sort of logical point against me. Definitely not.
grow the **** up, both of you, this is why i dont post sigs anymore
before i made the sig above me, i made this:
(http://i53.tinypic.com/2eycdgn.jpg)
Idc if anyone likes or hate it, i care of the one who requested it likes it, Opti, your a mixture of mmii and lyric, going on periods and always picking on players, srsly bro u a bad gm, im surprised your still gm.
locked.