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Other => GFX => Topic started by: Trustinme on December 31, 2011, 01:51:55 PM

Title: my new work
Post by: Trustinme on December 31, 2011, 01:51:55 PM
here
Cnc please
rate it from 1/10 please thx

(http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/trustinme2/darkvadersig3.png)

(http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/trustinme2/darkvadersig4.png)
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: tanqq on December 31, 2011, 01:56:46 PM
Your pentool is nice, but it doesn't fit with the flow or the sig. It also looks weird how vader wielded a lightsaber with no hands.

Overall I rate it a 4/10
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Nucleaon on December 31, 2011, 01:57:43 PM
you missed one step with your pen tool, you're supposed to add an outer glow on it. Your best work none the less
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Delta on December 31, 2011, 02:00:57 PM
trust
that's really nice
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Trustinme on December 31, 2011, 02:13:36 PM
ill edit the pen thing and the hand so it shows when i has time
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Meta on December 31, 2011, 02:13:52 PM
improvement but the render is lq, the font doesn't fit the sig, the bg and the effects stand out from each other, nice idead you had c:

the sadness of seeing everyone who failed become better than me
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Trustinme on December 31, 2011, 03:05:13 PM
i improved the sig abit i still need to get better at texts need to find a good tut for sig placing and making any1 know where i can find please

(http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/trustinme2/darkvadersig1.png)
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: XenoPath on December 31, 2011, 03:10:59 PM
From that angle it looks like Darth has a lightsaber penis lol. No offense, its nice tho.
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Yoshi91 on December 31, 2011, 03:40:43 PM
doesn't work to me the pen tool just sucks. Maybe try a smaller brush like size 1-2. Text is too hard to make out --should be lighter in color. Also erase or lower the opacity around the part where his left arm is holding the light saber so it wouldn't look too much like a penis.

4/10 :(
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Trustinme on December 31, 2011, 04:18:37 PM
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 31, 2011, 03:40:43 PM
doesn't work to me the pen tool just sucks. Maybe try a smaller brush like size 1-2. Text is too hard to make out --should be lighter in color. Also erase or lower the opacity around the part where his left arm is holding the light saber so it wouldn't look too much like a penis.

4/10 :(
made better backround
fixed the sword thing lol


(http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/trustinme2/darkvadersig3.png)

(http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/trustinme2/darkvadersig4.png)
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: Yoshi91 on December 31, 2011, 06:02:08 PM
Noice, noice. I like the second one w/o the humongous pen tool :)
Title: Re: my new work
Post by: spiderstar on December 31, 2011, 07:39:09 PM
Text: dafont.com

I give it a 3/10 cause it doesn't really blend and the pentool just looks out of place.