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Simple sig, plain and messy. CnC plz
using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p
i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot
imma give u a 7/10 on this
I hate that pentool. Takes to much focus.
You always manage to choose the lowest quality renders =_= lol
You need to work on the focal point of the sig. When you look at the face of your render you're distracted by the pentool and the harsh background. Other then that it looks fine. 6.5/10
Quote from: mo9 on January 01, 2012, 04:32:20 PM
using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p
i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot
imma give u a 7/10 on this
blurry bg makes it seem far away, tried to improve my depth. Added text for the lulz (I am always bad at text)
thx for liking my christmas sig lol, never knew anyone would like it.
@mhj - Is the pentool too bright?
@ anti - My oversharpening habit again, need to work on that too D:
@ spider - what do you mean by 'harsh bg'? Though I get what you mean by having the focal all over the sig
Quote from: tanqq on January 01, 2012, 04:40:12 PM
Quote from: mo9 on January 01, 2012, 04:32:20 PM
using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p
i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot
imma give u a 7/10 on this
blurry bg makes it seem far away, tried to improve my depth. Added text for the lulz (I am always bad at text)
thx for liking my christmas sig lol, never knew anyone would like it.
@mhj - Is the pentool too bright?
@ anti - My oversharpening habit again, need to work on that too D:
@ spider - what do you mean by 'harsh bg'? Though I get what you mean by having the focal all over the sig
Pentool is too bright. If you fix that it might look wierd so other things would have to be fixed as well.
well yeah u should blur the bg
but i usually give it levels
it adds way more depth
like i'm in a pic with a chair and a window behind me
i'll blur the window's scenery a bit more than i'll blur the chair
u get me ?
What I mean by a harsh background is that the background somewhat overpowers the render.
Quote from: mo9 on January 01, 2012, 04:43:59 PM
well yeah u should blur the bg
but i usually give it levels
it adds way more depth
like i'm in a pic with a chair and a window behind me
i'll blur the window's scenery a bit more than i'll blur the chair
u get me ?
I actually did that, guess it isn't very obvious. I first blurred the farthest building, then the 2nd building, and lastly blurred the sign next to the render
@ spider - Oh, I get it now