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Cnc and rate please ...thx
Looks good. The pentool failed tho'.
I would've done something more about the text. You created some great space for your text. A little suggest where to put a box with some good looking effects.
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You shouldn't stop I believe you can do better. Never give up.
I want it, after u are done editing it. :D