(http://i44.tinypic.com/inspx3.jpg)
Did you miss something?
can i has? ;) :D
I only see "Horizont".
The "A" and "L" should be more visible.. it took me about 30 seconds-1min to figure that out... And since it's just text, it should be clearly seen from the beginning. (:
cant see the l (someone show to me D:)
a is barely legible too
other then that its ok
ps
where my perm member u promise :'( :'( :'(
Quote from: KillerPig on March 24, 2012, 11:33:50 AM
cant see the l (someone show to me D:)
a is barely legible too
other then that its ok
ps
where my perm member u promise :'( :'( :'(
Every letter has that fading grey stroke. :) see it now?
Quote from: KillerPig on March 24, 2012, 11:33:50 AM
cant see the l (someone show to me D:)
a is barely legible too
other then that its ok
ps
where my perm member u promise :'( :'( :'(
(http://i40.tinypic.com/2vmwns0.png)
Is it clear after that pic?
Nope not really its not good. =/
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 01:12:29 PM
Nope not really its not good. =/
You're an okay gfx'r, yet your cnc's suck worse then the guys that can't gfx, what the **** lol.
EDIT
The font isn't exactly what I'd call clear, but the point of the thing wasn't really the text
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:22:05 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 01:12:29 PM
Nope not really its not good. =/
You're an okay gfx'r, yet your cnc's suck worse then the guys that can't gfx, what the **** lol.
Because it wasn't a cnc. It was just a c.
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 02:25:25 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:22:05 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 01:12:29 PM
Nope not really its not good. =/
You're an okay gfx'r, yet your cnc's suck worse then the guys that can't gfx, what the **** lol.
Because it wasn't a cnc. It was just a c.
Then stay out of my thread because you're absolutely useless
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:26:50 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 02:25:25 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:22:05 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 01:12:29 PM
Nope not really its not good. =/
You're an okay gfx'r, yet your cnc's suck worse then the guys that can't gfx, what the **** lol.
Because it wasn't a cnc. It was just a c.
Then stay out of my thread because you're absolutely useless
Ouch. Okay, its only c4ds, no real effects just a bunch of c4ds. I like the way the text looks thought it can be better on the end side.
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 02:28:19 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:26:50 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 02:25:25 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:22:05 PM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 01:12:29 PM
Nope not really its not good. =/
You're an okay gfx'r, yet your cnc's suck worse then the guys that can't gfx, what the **** lol.
Because it wasn't a cnc. It was just a c.
Then stay out of my thread because you're absolutely useless
Ouch. Okay, its only c4ds, no real effects just a bunch of c4ds. I like the way the text looks thought it can be better on the end side.
That's like the second time I've ever had to scold you about cnc's O-o. Anyway I've been focusing on working with c4d's that was the point lol
oh
the l's part of the a...
The text looks ugly with the background. But any text would look ugly with that background.
:-[
:-[ :-[
Quote from: 123bomb123 on March 24, 2012, 03:47:49 PM
The text looks ugly with the background. But any text would look ugly with that background.
:-[
:-[ :-[
Backgrounds best part, why do you say things like that when you have no experience
:-[
:-[ :-[
that tbh is not that good.
U could barely see font.
And background just looks kinda bad.
g am gfx king.
8)
8) 8)
Quote from: 123bomb123 on March 24, 2012, 10:17:48 PM
g am gfx king.
8)
8) 8)
If you can't for full sentences get out of my thread.
8)
8) 8)
@Peacelover: Explain what you mean about background o-o
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 10:36:57 PM
Quote from: 123bomb123 on March 24, 2012, 10:17:48 PM
g am gfx king.
8)
8) 8)
If you can't for full sentences get out of my thread.
8)
8) 8)
@Peacelover: Explain what you mean about background o-o
Did you ask for criticism? Why the **** do you always get so defensive when someone says bad things about your work. You asked for criticism whether good or bad its still criticism learn to take it.
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 02:07:20 AM
(http://i44.tinypic.com/inspx3.jpg)
It's too dark for me (that's just my opinion though).
I do like the colors and the text is fine except for at the end when you can't really make out the letters.
Overall, I like it.
@zepher the backround is just kinda like so well it just looks like c4d spammed in and the color red matches with text so u can barely see
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 10:49:06 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 10:36:57 PM
Quote from: 123bomb123 on March 24, 2012, 10:17:48 PM
g am gfx king.
8)
8) 8)
If you can't for full sentences get out of my thread.
8)
8) 8)
@Peacelover: Explain what you mean about background o-o
Did you ask for criticism? Why the **** do you always get so defensive when someone says bad things about your work. You asked for criticism whether good or bad its still criticism learn to take it.
Do you see any criticism in that post? No, it's spam and it's not a full sentence, so I told him to leave if he couldn't use full sentences, lrn2read.
@Peacelover: Like I said before, the point of the whole thing was to work on using c4d's, plus unlike Allie I don't believe you need a ton of contrast everywhere to make something look good
EDIT
On top of that Nuc, no I never asked for criticism, I simply posted my work with nothing else written; if someone is going to post criticism to my work, it needs to be a full cnc or it's completely useless, and the person who posted it can just leave, as they are of no value to the thread.
i sorry
:'(
:'( :'(
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 25, 2012, 12:02:24 AM
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 24, 2012, 10:49:06 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 24, 2012, 10:36:57 PM
Quote from: 123bomb123 on March 24, 2012, 10:17:48 PM
g am gfx king.
8)
8) 8)
If you can't for full sentences get out of my thread.
8)
8) 8)
@Peacelover: Explain what you mean about background o-o
Did you ask for criticism? Why the **** do you always get so defensive when someone says bad things about your work. You asked for criticism whether good or bad its still criticism learn to take it.
Do you see any criticism in that post? No, it's spam and it's not a full sentence, so I told him to leave if he couldn't use full sentences, lrn2read.
@Peacelover: Like I said before, the point of the whole thing was to work on using c4d's, plus unlike Allie I don't believe you need a ton of contrast everywhere to make something look good
EDIT
On top of that Nuc, no I never asked for criticism, I simply posted my work with nothing else written; if someone is going to post criticism to my work, it needs to be a full cnc or it's completely useless, and the person who posted it can just leave, as they are of no value to the thread.
It's not just this, its like every piece of your work you get defensive over it when someone says something bad.
its bad zephyr :[
Quote from: Selene on March 25, 2012, 11:32:27 PM
Quote from: Yz on March 25, 2012, 11:22:33 PM
Quote from: Pokeh on March 25, 2012, 04:13:27 PM
its spam zephyr :[
I don't think you guys are getting the point o-o, but anyway, kinda got the point that "you don't like it" a better post = why don't you like it and how can it be improved o-o
@Nuc: I get defensive when I don't see what they're talking about, here I got defensive cause it's a bunch of idiots posting the same thing over and over, pointlessly, including you
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 26, 2012, 06:47:39 PM
Quote from: Selene on March 25, 2012, 11:32:27 PM
Quote from: Yz on March 25, 2012, 11:22:33 PM
Quote from: Pokeh on March 25, 2012, 04:13:27 PM
its spam zephyr :[
I don't think you guys are getting the point o-o, but anyway, kinda got the point that "you don't like it" a better post = why don't you like it and how can it be improved o-o
@Nuc: I get defensive when I don't see what they're talking about, here I got defensive cause it's a bunch of idiots posting the same thing over and over, pointlessly, including you
They don't like it because its bad...
Quote from: Nucleaon on March 26, 2012, 08:28:55 PM
Quote from: zepher2211 on March 26, 2012, 06:47:39 PM
Quote from: Selene on March 25, 2012, 11:32:27 PM
Quote from: Yz on March 25, 2012, 11:22:33 PM
Quote from: Pokeh on March 25, 2012, 04:13:27 PM
its spam zephyr :[
I don't think you guys are getting the point o-o, but anyway, kinda got the point that "you don't like it" a better post = why don't you like it and how can it be improved o-o
@Nuc: I get defensive when I don't see what they're talking about, here I got defensive cause it's a bunch of idiots posting the same thing over and over, pointlessly, including you
They don't like it because its bad...
Write that in an essay and see how well it works out for ya, "I don't like it cause it's bad" Teacher: what is this second grade? I have no room for these types of responses, they contribute nothing, you obviously don't care if people make posts that mean nothing, I, on the other hand, do.
It really just does look bad. Beginning to end. No life, or way to improve since it just started out bad.
So, since you can't improve it, Can't say anything else brah :/
Quote from: Pokeh on March 26, 2012, 10:51:13 PM
It really just does look bad. Beginning to end. No life, or way to improve since it just started out bad.
So, since you can't improve it, Can't say anything else brah :/
I mean if that's the problem, then just don't post, if you see no way of improvement, and think it's that bad, there's no reason to say "I don't like it cause it's bad" cause that's pointless, it's already been said, and it does nothing to contribute to the thread o-o
ok consider it post count but we felt you needed to know :P
are you waiting for me to say it's bad so you can admit it's terrible?
Quote from: NoS on March 27, 2012, 05:49:08 AM
are you waiting for me to say it's bad so you can admit it's terrible?
Why would I wait for someone who barely visits this community O-o, no, actually I'm waiting for someone to come up with an original reply lolo
@Poke: I must say I'm slightly disappointed, you managed to tell me there was no possible way to improve a piece of work that I can edit any single part of, smh.
I know im not a good gfxer but i just think this will make it look better idk
I think you shouldn't make it that skinny
Add a render that relate to the subject. Which is horizontal you can think i dont want to do the work for you
Add a white border it makes it more cinematic look
Make it bigger
Dont just spam c4d put it in the right place so it looks the best
make text more clear
Quote from: -PeaceLover- on April 03, 2012, 07:37:43 PM
I know im not a good gfxer but i just think this will make it look better idk
I think you shouldn't make it that skinny
Add a render that relate to the subject. Which is horizontal you can think i dont want to do the work for you
Add a white border it makes it more cinematic look
Make it bigger
Dont just spam c4d put it in the right place so it looks the best
make text more clear
Call the render a focal, the focal of this sig is the text, I wouldn't replace that with a render because the sig was already built to be centered around the text, th reason it's this skinny is because I was competing in a competition to work with this size of canvas lol. The c4d's just kinda make up the bg, really I only used 3 c4d's, this spam thing is unrealistic. You're right about the text, I'm actually collabing with a person who wanted to try working with the text themselves.
Just because you're a newb gfx'r doesn't mean your input isn't appreciated, I don't care who comments with what as long as the reply is informed sounding and isn't just hate, actually tells me some way to improve. So thanks.