Please let me know if you find any grammatical mistakes. This is pretty important for me.
QuoteDear students, teachers and principals
Today I will give you a speech that is vocal
Advice is something I'm not always good at giving
Still, I will do it during this speech even if you're not approving
In this school we have grown together
I truly hope we will remember each other forever
The future we have all been waiting for lies ahead
It is now up to each and every one of us to make the most of it
Love and cherish your family
They are the reason you're here in your entirety
I hope all of you have friends you can rely on
If not, it's time to go out and get a move on
During our lifetime we will all get struck with confusion
In those hard times it's important not to jump to hasty conclusions
Faith is vital for every one
Whether it's religion or not; without it nothing can get done
Some say love is all you need
To that all I say is indeed
Discipline, discipline, discipline
Without it, regrets will come unraveling
Respect everyone equally; as much as you crave for respect yourself
Otherwise, you will in insolence dwell
Don't be afraid to show your true feelings
Hold them inside and you will most likely start squealing
Love your children as they are the future
Just don't raise them to become wild vultures
Remember to always choose quality over quantity
You don't want an overload of worthless entities
Always have an unquenchable thirst for knowledge
Knowledge is power and power is a constant advantage
School is what will get you furthest of all
Stay focused throughout and don't drop the ball
All of your goals might not come in an instant
But with hard work and determination, they will one day be extant
Strive endlessly for the best possible
Failure is something you don't want to shamefully mumble
Travel the world to experience fresh, novel and vivid events
If not, you might as well stay in your bubble and life pretend
Take on adversaries with the greatest of ease
In the future they will all come crying Please!
All healthy relationships are great
They are an endless loop of a wonderful fate
Always help the poor
In the future it might lead to opening doors
Fear is nonexistent
Courage is infinitely more pertinent
Be kind, be genuine
People will say you smell as good as cinnamon
Don't condemn your enemies immediately
But if you really have to; tell them off but not too crudely
Get a job
Without it, you might start to items rob
Work hard and work diligently
Only then will happiness seek you abundantly
Fortune favors the bold
Don't wait until you are too old
It's easy to get mistaken for a fool
Make sure people can see you're not a tool
In order to thrive and excel
You will have to bid irritation farewell
Be generous but stay smart
Don't favor those who will yourself thwart
Don't forget to have fun in your life
If you're not the humorous type, get a witty wife
Attention is not only for the big-shots
It will come naturally if sought
Never lose hope in what you believe
What you pursue, you will eventually receive
Be self-conscious at all times
It will make you reach great sublimes
Kneel before no one
Never allow yourself to be outdone
Live every second as if it were your last
Otherwise time will pass you by so fast; it's a faint memory of the past
They say yesterday is history
And that tomorrow is a mystery
Today is called present because it is a gift
You should most certainly not waste it
Be resilient toward bad influences
They come in all different nuances
Don't be reluctant to give
Live simply so others can simply live
You're the absolute finest
Everyone does attest; you're the world's greatest
I am now running out of my commencement-speech-imagination
For that, please don't wish me eternal damnation
As my speech comes to an end
I wish all of your dreams impend
hi
ok i read
Rhyming in a speech ticks me off to no end. This is not ****in dr seuss.
what allie said
QuoteDear students, teachers, and principals
Today I will give you a speech that is vocal
Advice is something I'm not always good at giving
Still, I will do it during this speech, even if you're not approving
In this school we have grown together
I truly hope we will remember each other forever
The future we have all been waiting for lies ahead
It is now up to each and every one of us to make the most of it
Love and cherish your family
They are the reason you're here in your entirety
I hope all of you have friends you can rely on
If not, it's time to go out and get a move on
During our lifetime, we will all get struck with confusion
In those hard times, it's important not to jump to hasty conclusions
Faith is vital for every one
Whether it's religion or not, without it, nothing can get done
Some say love is all you need
To that all I say is indeed
Discipline, discipline, discipline
Without it, regrets will come unraveling
Respect everyone equally as much as you crave for respect yourself
Otherwise, you will in insolence dwell
Don't be afraid to show your true feelings
Hold them inside and you will most likely start squealing
Love your children as they are the future
Just don't raise them to become wild vultures
Remember to always choose quality over quantity
You don't want an overload of worthless entities
Always have an unquenchable thirst for knowledge
Knowledge is power and power is a constant advantage
School is what will get you furthest of all
Stay focused throughout and don't drop the ball
All of your goals might not come in an instant
But with hard work and determination, they will one day be extant
Strive endlessly for the best possible
Failure is something you don't want to shamefully mumble
Travel the world to experience fresh, novel and vivid events
If not, you might as well stay in your bubble and life pretend
Take on adversaries with the greatest of ease
In the future they will all come crying please!
All healthy relationships are great
They are an endless loop of a wonderful fate
Always help the poor
In the future it might lead to opening doors
Fear is nonexistent
Courage is infinitely more pertinent
Be kind, be genuine
People will say you smell as good as cinnamon
Don't condemn your enemies immediately
But if you really have to, tell them off but not too crudely
Get a job
Without it, you might start to items rob
Work hard and work diligently
Only then will happiness seek you abundantly
Fortune favors the bold
Don't wait until you are too old
It's easy to get mistaken for a fool
Make sure people can see you're not a tool
In order to thrive and excel
You will have to bid irritation farewell
Be generous, but stay smart
Don't favor those who will yourself thwart
Don't forget to have fun in your life
If you're not the humorous type, get a witty wife
Attention is not only for the big-shots
It will come naturally if sought
Never lose hope in what you believe
What you pursue, you will eventually receive
Be self-conscious at all times
It will make you reach great sublimes
Kneel before no one
Never allow yourself to be outdone
Live every second as if it were your last
Otherwise time will pass you by so fast; it's a faint memory of the past
They say yesterday is history
And that tomorrow is a mystery
Today is called present because it is a gift
You should most certainly not waste it
Be resilient toward bad influences
They come in all different nuances
Don't be reluctant to give
Live simply so others can simply live
You're the absolute finest
Everyone does attest; you're the world's greatest
I am now running out of my commencement-speech-imagination
For that, please don't wish me eternal damnation
As my speech comes to an end
I wish all of your dreams impend
i just added commas where needed
i didnt change any words
unless your trying to be funny or can redo the whole thing with good rhymes, keep it simple brah
Quote from: Pokeh on September 06, 2012, 09:42:14 PM
unless your trying to be funny or can redo the whole thing with good rhymes, keep it simple brah
ya man, poke da rapper. check his first singles lyrics out:
yo yo my name poke my name rhyme with joke
QuoteBe kind, be genuine
People will say you smell as good as cinnamon
wtf lol
Quote from: Allie on September 06, 2012, 09:36:41 PM
Rhyming in a speech ticks me off to no end. This is not ****in dr seuss.
Anyone can write an ordinary speech. I constantly challenge myself so I decided to do something I'm not very good at, which is rhyming.
Quote from: Izy on September 07, 2012, 12:34:19 PM
Quote from: Allie on September 06, 2012, 09:36:41 PM
Rhyming in a speech ticks me off to no end. This is not ****in dr seuss.
Anyone can write an ordinary speech. I constantly challenge myself so I decided to do something I'm not very good at, which is rhyming.
a speech doesn't need to rhyme to not be ordinary, go look up "the girl who silenced the world" for some inspiration, also i agree with allie about the rhyming within the speech
not bad