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Title: Widow
Post by: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 02:43:01 PM
http://dreamerhq.bandcamp.com/track/widow (http://dreamerhq.bandcamp.com/track/widow)
http://soundcloud.com/abovedreams/sets/widow/ (http://soundcloud.com/abovedreams/sets/widow/)
DreaMer - Widow (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGJO01oltg4#)

CnC! = D

Also this was kind of a story teller. And listen before reading description and tell me how I did since it gives away the story.
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: zcnmashleu on September 11, 2012, 03:31:38 PM
The first few seconds sounded like christmas. Afterwards, till about 0.40, it felt like a game town soundtrack. Around 0.40-1.15 with the 'go away' + the beats, it didn't quite match. 1.20 onwards felt like a festive theme, slowly transitioning to a beach theme. The cheers at 3.18 could be brought forward? because before that, the beach theme was beginning to feel repetitive. Better than your other works.

The title doesn't suit the soundtrack. Pic feels alright, given that the lady was at the beach.

Edit: Just read your video description. It could be a market theme. Still don't feel the widow part.
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Meteor on September 11, 2012, 03:34:16 PM
The whole thing sounds like someone's shopping for christmas.
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 03:42:22 PM
Quote from: zcnmashleu on September 11, 2012, 03:31:38 PM
The first few seconds sounded like christmas. Afterwards, till about 0.40, it felt like a game town soundtrack. Around 0.40-1.15 with the 'go away' + the beats, it didn't quite match. 1.20 onwards felt like a festive theme, slowly transitioning to a beach theme. The cheers at 3.18 could be brought forward? because before that, the beach theme was beginning to feel repetitive. Better than your other works.

The title doesn't suit the soundtrack. Pic feels alright, given that the lady was at the beach.

Edit: Just read your video description. It could be a market theme. Still don't feel the widow part.

thank you.


and in european culture (even indian for that matter) traditional women wear little bells on their feet. which is her walking around in the market from the music i guess since she's gone cocoon mode since her husbands death.


i did some research on culture while doing this lawl
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: zomniethe4 on September 11, 2012, 06:07:50 PM
Poke should make bedtime songs for a living.
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Allie on September 11, 2012, 06:10:57 PM
If you don't know the girl irl I'm not listening.
/get your own model u "artist"
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 06:17:45 PM
Quote from: zomniethe4 on September 11, 2012, 06:07:50 PM
Poke should make bedtime songs for a living.

xD

Quote from: Allie on September 11, 2012, 06:10:57 PM
If you don't know the girl irl I'm not listening.
/get your own model u "artist"

ya ok get your own original game noob!

seriously tho she's just a famous actor who's apparently my grandmas uncles great grand daughters 3rd cousin or some shit. ya im gonna hire people for photoshoots i cant afford for a single song's cover art which im releasing for free lawl

and i could get friends to do it but meh. maybe for my next one i will ;o
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Allie on September 11, 2012, 06:18:44 PM
Do it for this one.
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 06:22:22 PM
ill make you a star allie
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: NeoKiller on September 11, 2012, 06:23:01 PM
sounds boring  ;D
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: mo9 on September 11, 2012, 07:19:18 PM
poke makes weird but good music
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: KillerPig on September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 07:48:38 PM
Quote from: KillerPig on September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke

no fku idc if u dont believe me > : [
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: 123bomb123 on September 11, 2012, 07:52:22 PM
she probably gay




like poke
Title: Re: Widow
Post by: KillerPig on September 12, 2012, 01:01:38 AM
Quote from: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 07:48:38 PM
Quote from: KillerPig on September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke

no fku idc if u dont believe me > : [
lolololololol

i joke poke only z is gay