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Title: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: Iridion on March 30, 2013, 07:17:40 PM

(http://i50.tinypic.com/zx7cco.png)

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: zomniethe4 on March 30, 2013, 07:45:58 PM

i'll be the first to point out that this doesn't look like abstract
if you know what I mean

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: 123bomb123 on March 30, 2013, 09:36:24 PM

Quote from: Iridion on March 30, 2013, 07:17:40 PM
(http://i50.tinypic.com/zx7cco.png)

should be a banner for becauseimagirl.ca (https://www.google.ca/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&ved=0CFIQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fbecauseiamagirl.ca%2F&ei=yHZXUbXxBcrcqQG4soDIAw&usg=AFQjCNFYqh08w5D6IsGrfU9Lg7fmR-OdrQ&bvm=bv.44442042,d.aWM)

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: leroy0690 on March 31, 2013, 01:01:35 AM

Certainly a neat concept, love the overall simplistic look. The text seems to be alright, but I don't like how it overlaps the lines. Maybe if you scootch it over towards the left a bit more.

I also think the large empty blue areas could be given some more detail with a soft round brush at 94% opacity and the brush setting set to scatter, just a little bit of scatter. Or just just straight smudge lines, I see some dark blue and a sort of aqua color in the empty blue spaces, maybe just smudge those a bit to make it more interesting.

The red also seems to be having a bit of trouble blending into the white lines.

Great work. :)

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: Iridion on March 31, 2013, 02:15:15 PM

COME ON it doesnt look like one :(

Quote from: leroy0690 on March 31, 2013, 01:01:35 AM
Certainly a neat concept, love the overall simplistic look. The text seems to be alright, but I don't like how it overlaps the lines. Maybe if you scootch it over towards the left a bit more.

I also think the large empty blue areas could be given some more detail with a soft round brush at 94% opacity and the brush setting set to scatter, just a little bit of scatter. Or just just straight smudge lines, I see some dark blue and a sort of aqua color in the empty blue spaces, maybe just smudge those a bit to make it more interesting.

The red also seems to be having a bit of trouble blending into the white lines.

Great work. :)

wow thanks for the extended cnc :o

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: Selene on March 31, 2013, 02:16:21 PM

It reminded me of a mermaid tail.. Lolz.

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: Iridion on March 31, 2013, 02:19:28 PM

Quote from: Selene on March 31, 2013, 02:16:21 PM
It reminded me of a mermaid tail.. Lolz.

see z thats artistic sense you dummy

Title: Re: i dont even know - abstract?
Post by: mo9 on April 13, 2013, 12:24:30 PM

Flamazing.
it's pretty only thing i don't like is the txt but it's no biggie

BoutCheetah

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