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Title: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 11:11:56 AM
ok this is just a small rhyming rap and this is for fun and i just took cooky's name for it, it isn't anything real about cooky and no offence this is for fun! ok heres it

cooky was eating cookies, his mommy is cooking his cookies
omg... why is cooky so cöcky and crooky? because cooky's cooker isn't cooking.
and cooky is watching mickey, so cooky is mickey and cooky is mocking mickey, so mickey is cooky
cooky is cool. so cooky is cooling his cooler and cooky is monkey and monkey likes cookies.

i will make more later
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: qolderman on May 11, 2014, 11:14:53 AM
yo dawg..

lol nice rhyme
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: zomniethe4 on May 11, 2014, 11:22:13 AM
Quote from: Pein on May 11, 2014, 11:11:56 AM
i will make more later
please no
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 11:23:37 AM
thanks qold

Quote from: zomniethe4 on May 11, 2014, 11:22:13 AM
Quote from: Pein on May 11, 2014, 11:11:56 AM
i will make more later
please no
why?
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 11:35:38 AM
Quote from: nanak tatum on May 11, 2014, 11:31:13 AM
It seems like after you made that thread (complaining about staff) you are acting more foolish/trollish lately.
this is spam!

also which thread? i have many rant threads

I'M JUST RAPPING!!!
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: 123bomb123 on May 11, 2014, 11:41:33 AM
put a pokeh Indian sampled beat behind that and ur gold!!!
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 12:34:38 PM
poke's playing n picking the pokers, the pricks are picking on da poor pokey and his pocket is pity...
oh no... poke is peeing in de pipes, now he's hell out of de poker club!...
now the poke with da police beeping & mocking pokeh
so poke is picking his pickles and pokeh is pranking & pickling his pricks
poke is peak in speaking & being pricky and tricky and trucking, he's tricking the truckers, so da truckers are tricking de pokey
finally nigging nigg@s are poking da poor pokeh
and pokey wears bikini, so pokey is pumbing his puppies and the puppets are wearing pokey's bikini
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 12:45:29 PM
ur bad at using forumers (unlike me kek)

but my friend killerpig likes your rap a lots and would like more
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: JustRK on May 11, 2014, 12:52:43 PM
The overuse of random alliteration makes me feel like something a highly intoxicated Dr. Seuss would come up with lol  :P

Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 12:59:23 PM
Quote from: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 12:45:29 PM
ur bad at using forumers (unlike me kek)

but my friend killerpig likes your rap a lots and would like more
u mean it is bad to use our forumers in rapping and avoid em in rapping?! and is it bad to use someone in rapping?!

HOW WILL IT BE FUN THEN? will make more rhyming raps soon

@rk
maybe yes but it is for rhyming how else will it be rhyming?
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 01:28:54 PM
Quote from: Pein on May 11, 2014, 12:59:23 PM
Quote from: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 12:45:29 PM
ur bad at using forumers (unlike me kek)

but my friend killerpig likes your rap a lots and would like more
u mean it is bad to use our forumers in rapping and avoid em in rapping?! and is it bad to use someone in rapping?!

HOW WILL IT BE FUN THEN? will make more rhyming raps soon

@rk
maybe yes but it is for rhyming how else will it be rhyming?

no you suck at it
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: leapman on May 11, 2014, 04:35:15 PM
I challenge pein to a battle rap ::)
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 11, 2014, 06:51:58 PM
Quote from: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 01:28:54 PM
Quote from: Pein on May 11, 2014, 12:59:23 PM
Quote from: Iridion on May 11, 2014, 12:45:29 PM
ur bad at using forumers (unlike me kek)

but my friend killerpig likes your rap a lots and would like more
u mean it is bad to use our forumers in rapping and avoid em in rapping?! and is it bad to use someone in rapping?!

HOW WILL IT BE FUN THEN? will make more rhyming raps soon

@rk
maybe yes but it is for rhyming how else will it be rhyming?

no you suck at it
HOW TO IMPROVE??!!

Quote from: leapman on May 11, 2014, 04:35:15 PM
I challenge pein to a battle rap ::)
NOOO I JUST STARTED TODAY SO I'LL SUCK AND LOSE.
SO NOOOO.
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 12, 2014, 07:11:34 AM
Quote from: kulvinder on May 12, 2014, 04:21:40 AM
Hehe  not bad.
TY!
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 12, 2014, 10:21:49 AM
New rhyme of our Santa!

santa's a phantom in making fantas, santa's in sand seeking sick suckers.
did ya know that santa was a panda?! santa's mantle was missing n mr z was kissing
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Cooky on May 12, 2014, 10:38:21 AM
 how can pein be   when his brain is a pea

is pein smart   doesn't seem to be

what is pein  does it mean piss

this thread is stupid

my contribution is this
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: Pein on May 12, 2014, 10:54:20 AM
cooky, since u did this...

cooky's fool cooky's fool cooky's fool

^just a rhyme (no offense)
Title: Re: A small rhyme
Post by: qolderman on May 12, 2014, 11:44:47 AM
Quote from: Cooky on May 12, 2014, 10:38:21 AM
how can pein be   when his brain is a pea

is pein smart   doesn't seem to be

what is pein  does it mean piss

this thread is stupid

my contribution is this
bc rap v3

lelele, nice rhyme btw ;D