original:
(http://i.gyazo.com/69f3d540c20a1c91b1dcae19f3f2334c.png)
(http://i.gyazo.com/a74ceba29d018cb9529fb2baf1de4246.png)
(http://i.gyazo.com/e7cc36e2493ded42343895bd0268aaf4.png) - dont really like it in color
not really a sig, more like a cropped large art (stating this b4 ian comments on focal as always even tho hes wrong xd)
(http://i.gyazo.com/6456e5bcdeecbbe0a4390a10d80c7bb6.png) - owl drawing, face is not done obv
looks gr8 ;D
No focal point, the flow of the sig is all over the place, the dimensions bother me, text doesn't fit with the render, you didn't use a stock, the colors are ugly, only people who are goth like black and white sigs, the lighting is off, there's 2 people... should only be 1, not enough hashtags, idk how you're not good at gfxing yet...
Do I sound like a typical criticizer now?
Looks good, I like how you tried to make the white character seem to blend in more to the background since in the original he just stands out. However, it seems a lil unnecessarily dark in some places.. That's only the case for the colored version, the B/W version is perfectly fine it's just I wish the background wasn't as dark in the B/W one.
i love the first one :D
Quote from: spiderstar on January 23, 2015, 03:37:30 AM
No focal point, the flow of the sig is all over the place, the dimensions bother me, text doesn't fit with the render, you didn't use a stock, the colors are ugly, only people who are goth like black and white sigs, the lighting is off, there's 2 people... should only be 1, not enough hashtags, idk how you're not good at gfxing yet...
Do I sound like a typical criticizer now?
Looks good, I like how you tried to make the white character seem to blend in more to the background since in the original he just stands out. However, it seems a lil unnecessarily dark in some places.. That's only the case for the colored version, the B/W version is perfectly fine it's just I wish the background wasn't as dark in the B/W one.
thx for not being a retard
sig and owl are really nice, good job
maybe too much noise but i see what you are trying to do, good idea using it with the rgb split