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Title: What do you think?
Post by: zepher2211 on February 15, 2011, 07:17:10 PM

I'm working on a memoir for class, it's not done this is a draft with the first to pages. But what do yuo think?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ti4wUxxQzbQQuw8kB9OLPKUHny94CNls7Z5mqVCUIRY/edit?hl=en&authkey=CK7hmOQM

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Jeffalo13 on February 15, 2011, 07:26:09 PM

Any way I could edit it for you :P?

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: zepher2211 on February 15, 2011, 07:28:28 PM

Kinda personal thing lol tell me what you think should be changed, I know my verb tense needs to be changed to all present tense.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Surgeypurgey on February 16, 2011, 01:21:07 AM

I don't see anything. All I see is just a sign up page or a sign in page

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: zepher2211 on February 16, 2011, 06:27:15 PM

You might have to sign in to a google acc to see it iunno

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Insaniity on February 16, 2011, 06:51:28 PM

To lazy to read o.o Lol.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: thugzy on February 16, 2011, 06:58:01 PM

QuoteMy brother go to bed after dinner, while I act like I'm going to bed, but I don't, I've been an insomniac since I was five, a nice side effect of long nights in the hospital.

"goes"
;D

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Xrow on February 16, 2011, 11:36:24 PM

Let Jeff edit it, lol. Your grammar is terrible. Good storyline from what I read, though.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: zepher2211 on February 17, 2011, 12:20:08 AM

gimme a break I wrote it off the top of my head and haven't edited it at all >.<

BoutCheetah

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