render please

final result

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cnc and rate pls ...thx

updated

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Cnc and rate pls ...thx

edited belly thing

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cnc and rate please .. thx

edited the background a bit hope better

cnc please
i am improving ?

nice i like it alot
dont know how to cnc sorry

but i rate it 8/10  

Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 31, 2011, 03:40:43 PM
doesn't work to me the pen tool just sucks. Maybe try a smaller brush like size 1-2. Text is too hard to make out --should be lighter in color. Also erase or lower the opacity around the part where his left arm is holding the light saber so it wouldn't look too much like a penis.

4/10

made better backround
fixed the sword thing lol

i improved the sig abit i still need to get better at texts need to find a good tut for sig placing and making any1 know where i can find please

ill edit the pen thing and the hand so it shows when i has time

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Cnc please
rate it from 1/10 please thx

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Cnc
which is the best version too