give metoer credit at least selene
srsly

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close thred

Quote from: 123bomb123 on June 05, 2014, 12:33:21 AM

Quote from: Selene on June 04, 2014, 10:50:57 PM
Only Cooky would do that and yet I never said I would call it mine.

And no Pig.

but you're entering it as your entry so it's implying that it's your work.

what's the prize

basically 50 dollars

ur trying to use someone elses art work to win a contest

lololololololololololololololol

y do u need more gms

2nd is awful
1st is rly nice

50

Quote from: 123bomb123 on May 28, 2014, 12:50:51 AM

Quote from: JustRK on May 27, 2014, 11:36:29 PM

The word "amazing" is a near rhyme of  the word "daily"

in what world, haha.

Quote from: zomniethe4 on May 28, 2014, 12:05:22 AM

Quote from: 123bomb123 on May 27, 2014, 08:18:43 PM
Or you can say

"I've always been amazed
[...]
You can't help but gaze"

I never knew you would be helpful one day

but i see where u guys are going with that

I've been writing poetry recreationally for 4-5 years.    

wouldve never known...

Quote from: 123bomb123 on May 27, 2014, 08:18:43 PM
Or you can say

"I've always been amazed
[...]
You can't help but gaze"

I never knew you would be helpful one day

but i see where u guys are going with that

Quote from: KillerPig on May 27, 2014, 06:21:20 PM
that is the most retarded final i have ever heard of

its not like you're analyzing somebody else's poem to figure out what was going on in their head. you're literally reading your own ****ing poem. how can there be a deeper meaning than what you meant when you wrote it

is that really the final or did u word it wrong
or am i retarded



also here is poem in 1 pic because im good guy
i guess u can say im a good guy greg
ahahah memes

(click to show/hide)

we have to give what it means to us as the author in a detailed essay format.

and yeah poke, i was keeping it simple because im not the best with poems so i didnt want to overdo something

Is there some type of courtesy with the amount of stanzas?
Like how generally with flowers, you would want an odd number.

For my English final, we're going be writing a poem and then analyzing our own poem for a deeper meaning.
I need to his to read my and give CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
No bullshit. This is very important. Tell me some things I can change around or do to improve it or what not.

Games live! My ign is Wish

how about piggy
or killer
lmao

we need more detail man

but atm id say let them out of your life. ur only becoming a nuisance