[qwerasdf2453]

V1


V2


Lol the title haha Cnc

[Pokeh]

i like the glow text on v2 but the red should be a little darker to match her shirt a little more

[qwerasdf2453]

indeed

[antisickness]

Looks really nice but the text, oh the text. Sometimes it's better without...
also, the blue brush alongside her on the right looks really unnatural, so do the red and blue lines around her. (actually the blue ones are okay but the red ones aren't.)

At least you're starting to develop your own style now

[mhj]

The text ruins it 100% in my opinion. The text takes way to much attention.