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Widow

Started by Pokeh, September 11, 2012, 02:43:01 PM

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Pokeh

http://dreamerhq.bandcamp.com/track/widow
http://soundcloud.com/abovedreams/sets/widow/
DreaMer - Widow

CnC! = D

Also this was kind of a story teller. And listen before reading description and tell me how I did since it gives away the story.

zcnmashleu

September 11, 2012, 03:31:38 PM #1 Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 03:35:57 PM by zcnmashleu
The first few seconds sounded like christmas. Afterwards, till about 0.40, it felt like a game town soundtrack. Around 0.40-1.15 with the 'go away' + the beats, it didn't quite match. 1.20 onwards felt like a festive theme, slowly transitioning to a beach theme. The cheers at 3.18 could be brought forward? because before that, the beach theme was beginning to feel repetitive. Better than your other works.

The title doesn't suit the soundtrack. Pic feels alright, given that the lady was at the beach.

Edit: Just read your video description. It could be a market theme. Still don't feel the widow part.



Meteor

The whole thing sounds like someone's shopping for christmas.

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Pokeh

Quote from: zcnmashleu on September 11, 2012, 03:31:38 PM
The first few seconds sounded like christmas. Afterwards, till about 0.40, it felt like a game town soundtrack. Around 0.40-1.15 with the 'go away' + the beats, it didn't quite match. 1.20 onwards felt like a festive theme, slowly transitioning to a beach theme. The cheers at 3.18 could be brought forward? because before that, the beach theme was beginning to feel repetitive. Better than your other works.

The title doesn't suit the soundtrack. Pic feels alright, given that the lady was at the beach.

Edit: Just read your video description. It could be a market theme. Still don't feel the widow part.

thank you.


and in european culture (even indian for that matter) traditional women wear little bells on their feet. which is her walking around in the market from the music i guess since she's gone cocoon mode since her husbands death.


i did some research on culture while doing this lawl

zomniethe4

Poke should make bedtime songs for a living.

Zom

Allie

If you don't know the girl irl I'm not listening.
/get your own model u "artist"

Pokeh

Quote from: zomniethe4 on September 11, 2012, 06:07:50 PM
Poke should make bedtime songs for a living.

xD

Quote from: Allie on September 11, 2012, 06:10:57 PM
If you don't know the girl irl I'm not listening.
/get your own model u "artist"

ya ok get your own original game noob!

seriously tho she's just a famous actor who's apparently my grandmas uncles great grand daughters 3rd cousin or some shit. ya im gonna hire people for photoshoots i cant afford for a single song's cover art which im releasing for free lawl

and i could get friends to do it but meh. maybe for my next one i will ;o

Allie


Pokeh

ill make you a star allie

NeoKiller


mo9

September 11, 2012, 07:19:18 PM #10 Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 07:49:13 PM by mo9
poke makes weird but good music
ZeaL Rank 1 BvB, just because


vv secks box

KillerPig

September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM #11 Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 07:28:14 PM by KillerPig
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke

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Pokeh

Quote from: KillerPig on September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke

no fku idc if u dont believe me > : [

123bomb123

she probably gay




like poke
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mrz is like top 40 and would probly be like
"fuk yeh n00bs im god bow to god''

KillerPig

Quote from: Pokeh on September 11, 2012, 07:48:38 PM
Quote from: KillerPig on September 11, 2012, 07:27:32 PM
no way anyone that hot can be even remotely related to poke

no fku idc if u dont believe me > : [
lolololololol

i joke poke only z is gay

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