no.
For starters, it's ugly.
The render blends in with the background too much, yet it has no blending effects whatsoever, just making it a retard contradiction making it worse.
The background looks stupid as if you took the render and copy/pasted it everywhere and guassian blurred it.
The text is gay.
It's too big (the average avatar is 65x65, sometimes 100x100).
The text is still gay.
The render seems to have spikes coming out of his head, this is a huge turn off.
And it's ugly.