[zepher2211]

[tanqq]

Render is pretty dark. Text is bad. Left arm is looks like it's distorted.

[zepher2211]

Render is pretty dark. Text is bad. Left arm is looks like it's distorted.

render started out dark, duh, saying it's bad tell's me nothing, and the render isn't distorted in the slightest o-o

[tanqq]

Render is pretty dark. Text is bad. Left arm is looks like it's distorted.

render started out dark, duh, saying it's bad tell's me nothing, and the render isn't distorted in the slightest o-o

I can barely see the text, arm is too dark.

[zepher2211]

Render is pretty dark. Text is bad. Left arm is looks like it's distorted.

render started out dark, duh, saying it's bad tell's me nothing, and the render isn't distorted in the slightest o-o

I can barely see the text, arm is too dark.

The text would look idiotic if it was really visible, it's being used with a clipping mask just for that purpose :\ I made the arm dark in attempt to create depth, didn't work out well.

[kaos555]

Looks like shit imo.
To dark..Yellow doesn't look to good...the lines dont look the best either. I think it migh tlook better with a better render tho.

[KillerPig]

just my personal opinion..

render is too srs and i guess fierce for the bg u made