[VooDoo]

hey guys I was introduced to the site by dimon69 and was tolled that this here is a good place to get a C&C
so guys help me improve and C&C this tag of mine
thanks ^_^

[Allie]

You're really good.

[mo9]

umm most ppl here arnt as good as you so most of the C&C will be positive stuff XD

i really like it xpt the dark stuff ar the left (imo the upper part needs a little erasing) besides that its epix

[hawk5005]

In my opinion it needs a border.
Well, that's all, the rest is really good.

[Yz]

I see too much. The focal is all over the place & looks kinda LQ. Border woulda done well in this sig.. And only the top of the render looks blended at all. Has too much going on @ the top without enough going on at the bottom left, and I don't have much more to say, it's a good sig. Would say more but 5am & other stuffs

[Optimism]

Love it. Great Depth.

[VooDoo]

You're really good.

ye thanks ma'am

umm most ppl here arnt as good as you so most of the C&C will be positive stuff XD

i really like it xpt the dark stuff ar the left (imo the upper part needs a little erasing) besides that its epix

hmm I will keep that in mind and don't be afraid to tell what on your mind lol, there are many flaws even in God (my philosophy) so don't be afraid and don't ever get dis heartend by any one else mate, you are your only opponent Ive seen your sigs here and there ^_^ keep it up mate you too and thx for the C&C

In my opinion it needs a border.
Well, that's all, the rest is really good.

hmm bout borders mate I never use them... just well don't like it dunno my fetishes I guess lol
and thanks mate

I see too much. The focal is all over the place & looks kinda LQ. Border woulda done well in this sig.. And only the top of the render looks blended at all. Has too much going on @ the top without enough going on at the bottom left, and I don't have much more to say, it's a good sig. Would say more but 5am & other stuffs

hmm I see mate, well that is my style I guess ^_^, but I will make sure to take your input into considerations mate thanks for the C&C

Love it. Great Depth.

haha thanks brah

[mo9]

umm are you australian ?

[VooDoo]

umm are you australian ?

nope mate why do you ask ? is it because I say mate? it is a universal word for friend or something like pal

[mo9]

umm are you australian ?

nope mate why do you ask ? is it because I say mate? it is a universal word for friend or something like pal

mostly used in australia XD << stereo type :O

on topic : how did u do the light source ? added the colors and made them overlay ? ( cause it's like yellow but has orange at the edges)

[hawk5005]

Anyone speaking original English ( the one spoken in the UK ) says mate very often.

[VooDoo]

on topic : how did u do the light source ? added the colors and made them overlay ? ( cause it's like yellow but has orange at the edges)[/color][/b]

uhm this might be harsh but mate you need to understand more then C4D and brushes... you see this tag was purely made of brushes I created and lots of textures and layer settings... so I hope that you can understand that at this time Im un able to teach this style to you.
but when I feel you are ready I will teach it to you

Anyone speaking original English ( the one spoken in the UK ) says mate very often.

lol mate Im not a native English speaker but I was raised in an environment where we learned well what you call "original English"

[NoS]

I looked at it first and thought it looked nice.

Then I looked closer and didn't like it as much.

Too 'noisy', is how I feel about it. Focal could be moved slightly to the left and that perhaps rebalancing the composition could work. And maybe a little desaturation might do something nice. Border would also look nice. Oh and last thing. Seems to have too much conflicting elements. A coherent overtone, but incoherency between parts.

[VooDoo]

I looked at it first and thought it looked nice.

Then I looked closer and didn't like it as much.

Too 'noisy', is how I feel about it. Focal could be moved slightly to the left and that perhaps rebalancing the composition could work. And maybe a little desaturation might do something nice. Border would also look nice. Oh and last thing. Seems to have too much conflicting elements. A coherent overtone, but incoherency between parts.

yikes ouch >.< thanks mate for the CnC conflicting element... I don't see them but I will try

[Allie]

I looked at it first and thought it looked nice.

Then I looked closer and didn't like it as much.

Too 'noisy', is how I feel about it. Focal could be moved slightly to the left and that perhaps rebalancing the composition could work. And maybe a little desaturation might do something nice. Border would also look nice. Oh and last thing. Seems to have too much conflicting elements. A coherent overtone, but incoherency between parts.

You didn't make this did you?
Cause if you did, this is the worst sig you've ever made.