Have you considered how little of what you've got there lines up with itself?
Colors are all over the spectrum; needlessly so, the background looks like some messy flux, with a spam of mess of C4Ds accounting for your blending. The text isn't 'blended', it's just intrusive.
Looking at this, if you're going to ask me, is like looking at a car that was built from several different cars and then plastered with multicolor decals.