[tanqq]

Simple sig, plain and messy. CnC plz

[mo9]

using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p

i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot

imma give u a 7/10 on this

[mhj]

I hate that pentool. Takes to much focus.

[antisickness]

You always manage to choose the lowest quality renders =_= lol

[spiderstar]

You need to work on the focal point of the sig.  When you look at the face of your render you're distracted by the pentool and the harsh background.  Other then that it looks fine. 6.5/10

[tanqq]

using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p

i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot

imma give u a 7/10 on this

blurry bg makes it seem far away, tried to improve my depth.  Added text for the lulz (I am always bad at text)

thx for liking my christmas sig lol, never knew anyone would like it.

@mhj - Is the pentool too bright?

@ anti - My oversharpening habit again, need to work on that too D:

@ spider - what do you mean by 'harsh bg'? Though I get what you mean by having the focal all over the sig

[mhj]

using the pen tool a bit too early i see :p

i dont really like the focal
uh the glow effect could be done way better
depth needs some work ( focus blur ....) cause its just a blurred bg
txt fails idk how u could make it better try clipping masks
too monotone for my liking
but its a decent sig , and ur improving i liked ur Christmas sig allot

imma give u a 7/10 on this

blurry bg makes it seem far away, tried to improve my depth.  Added text for the lulz (I am always bad at text)

thx for liking my christmas sig lol, never knew anyone would like it.

@mhj - Is the pentool too bright?

@ anti - My oversharpening habit again, need to work on that too D:

@ spider - what do you mean by 'harsh bg'? Though I get what you mean by having the focal all over the sig

Pentool is too bright. If you fix that it might look wierd so other things would have to be fixed as well.

[mo9]

well yeah u should blur the bg
but i usually give it levels
it adds way more depth
like i'm in a pic with a chair and a window behind me
i'll blur the window's scenery a bit more than i'll blur the chair
u get me ?

[spiderstar]

What I mean by a harsh background is that the background somewhat overpowers the render.

[tanqq]

well yeah u should blur the bg
but i usually give it levels
it adds way more depth
like i'm in a pic with a chair and a window behind me
i'll blur the window's scenery a bit more than i'll blur the chair
u get me ?

I actually did that, guess it isn't very obvious. I first blurred the farthest building, then the 2nd building, and lastly blurred the sign next to the render

@ spider - Oh, I get it now