[123bomb123]

2 much effect spam ok did u learn from hawk or something

and text is ugly

[-PeaceLover-]

break a leg speedy

[mo9]

ok so this one has too many effects , the overlay text doesn't look good
the flow is pretty decent , but the c4d spam kinda ruins it for me 6/10

background is just bad , i like the effects around the head they have potential to look better tho
text is still kinda bad 5/10