[JustRK]

@MisterZ.  If I've learned anything about hip hop arguing with para back in the day and just being in the scene it's that rap is what ever you want it to be. Syllables don't have to fall on the beat as long as you got them out how you intended them. Anyway your opinion is as valid as mine, just wanted to say that.


As far as the original post concerns I commend the fact that you did what you did. Only constructive pointer I can give is that when you use audacity (which you probably did) to amplify your raw voice file so that the peaks of your voice are roughly the same length as that of the beat. Otherwise nicely done 

[leapman]

Awesome ! This is great! Keep it up! 
You actually finished what you started and that is a big accomplishment.
I am awestruck.  : o
Edit:Btw plz post the lyrics or add them to the description.

There already in the description of the youtube video but I guess I can post it on here:


Lyrics

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(hook)
Every Day I think about the gigas,
What am I gon' do with all this money
I can't go a day without my cheddar
You know that I'm married to my gigas (2x)

Spending gigas, selling boxes, making big racks
Flexing on these haters, we balling like that
Got banned twice so my giga bank crashed
Hit the sector, then yes I made it all back
Some people hating, cause we collecting big stacks
Yes EGK winning simple as that
Don't **** with EGK, than I don't know you
Please don't hit me up, cause I ain't your homie

(hook)

JustRK and Me, bringing the game back
Jetsurge and I be stacking our bread up
All these pony friends, really got me fed up
Hit up Alex, now we talking cheddar
Free Godz his ban is protracted
Ugly ass haters, please use proactive
Meet up with Medchill, now we ballin'
**** making diss tracks, chasing cheddar

[123bomb123]

@MisterZ.  If I've learned anything about hip hop arguing with para back in the day and just being in the scene it's that rap is what ever you want it to be. Syllables don't have to fall on the beat as long as you got them out how you intended them.

they dont necessarily have to be in sync with snares, but really should go along with the instrumental patterns. idk, im lenient with experimental rappers, and have listened to numerous. I know the good/listenable ones have proper flow on beats, while para is choppy over a now-conventional trap beat. idk, you'd think with the subgemre where most rappers stick to fundamental rapping would be easy to pull off.

that and however he "intended it to sound like" isn't really great -- to me.

[leapman]

@MisterZ.  If I've learned anything about hip hop arguing with para back in the day and just being in the scene it's that rap is what ever you want it to be. Syllables don't have to fall on the beat as long as you got them out how you intended them.

they dont necessarily have to be in sync with snares, but really should go along with the instrumental patterns. idk, im lenient with experimental rappers, and have listened to numerous. I know the good/listenable ones have proper flow on beats, while para is choppy over a now-conventional trap beat. idk, you'd think with the subgemre where most rappers stick to fundamental rapping would be easy to pull off.

that and however he "intended it to sound like" isn't really great -- to me.

Alright so there are some dislikes revolving around the quality/flow of the rap. Thanks for the constructive criticism, I didn't really take the project that seriously to an extent so its pretty understandable some of the reaction I got. I'll see what I can do next time.

[tincan]

For 3 hours, I think its great.

[Pokeh]

I like the beat (lol tropical) but tone down the auto-tune into something more kanye-like and less t-pain-like

[noblem6]

He just said that it took only 3 hours as med witnessed it but, what if he was preparing for it without telling anybody? It might be a well planned case by him.