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« on: July 17, 2018, 02:54:24 AM »

https://soundcloud.com/dj-ohka/dj-ohka-2k18-showcase
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« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2018, 07:07:43 PM »

Juicy, really like the first 4.5 minutes
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« Reply #2 on: July 19, 2018, 08:55:27 AM »

Liked it from 0-4:40 and 6:30-7:00

4:40-5:30 sounds out of place and..just kinda 'flat'? I can't think of a better way to articulate it, but 6:30-6:55 makes me wish 4:40-530 had more going on.

The last minute feels like it was just added for length too tbh. It definitely doesn't add anything to the song for me at least.


Aside from the criticisms above though I was enjoying it a lot

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« Reply #3 on: July 19, 2018, 09:11:50 AM »

thx a lot for critique

i agree on 4:40-5:30 (it's generally a flat song that one) and the last minute dragging on, i should have ended it a bit sooner but still wanted to include a bit of it

most of the technical fault in the mix is in those areas and it's because i really wanted to include that particular mashup in the mix when it didn't really suit the other songs, reasons being it's one of my better made mashups (the songs are perfect together) and that i thought a change of pace might make the mix more refreshing

but i don't think a change of pace in such a short mix is necessary, and as you said it definitely dragged on

from this mix onward i'm only gonna try to make shit i consider perfect for my skill level as i'm really taking a pro approach to djing nowadays, so all criticism helps a lot. changes of pace shouldn't be so sudden in shorter mixes, and songs shouldn't drag over too long compared to others

also ty med
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« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2018, 09:56:15 AM »

thx a lot for critique

i agree on 4:40-5:30 (it's generally a flat song that one) and the last minute dragging on, i should have ended it a bit sooner but still wanted to include a bit of it

most of the technical fault in the mix is in those areas and it's because i really wanted to include that particular mashup in the mix when it didn't really suit the other songs, reasons being it's one of my better made mashups (the songs are perfect together) and that i thought a change of pace might make the mix more refreshing

but i don't think a change of pace in such a short mix is necessary, and as you said it definitely dragged on

from this mix onward i'm only gonna try to make shit i consider perfect for my skill level as i'm really taking a pro approach to djing nowadays, so all criticism helps a lot. changes of pace shouldn't be so sudden in shorter mixes, and songs shouldn't drag over too long compared to others

also ty med

Yeah I was gonna say that the song sounded much more professional than your stuff years ago. It felt like I was listening to someone who's on the come up and trying to get their shit together rather than someone messing around making music.

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« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2018, 11:50:01 AM »

can you create 'this is boutcheetah cooky' remix?
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« Reply #6 on: July 22, 2018, 12:56:21 AM »

can you create 'this is boutcheetah cooky' remix?

**** think of the potential, would hate to ruin a masterpiece tho
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« Reply #7 on: July 22, 2018, 09:41:05 PM »

Where else do you upload your stuff? I Don't use soundcloud.

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« Reply #8 on: July 23, 2018, 05:24:01 AM »

Was aight up till to 4 minute mark.
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« Reply #9 on: July 24, 2018, 12:18:56 AM »

Was aight up till to 4 minute mark.

yeah most people seem to agree that it falls off from there

Where else do you upload your stuff? I Don't use soundcloud.

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« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2018, 08:12:41 AM »

First 4 minutes litty
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« Reply #11 on: August 04, 2018, 05:14:07 PM »

can you create 'this is boutcheetah cooky' remix?

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« Reply #12 on: August 07, 2018, 10:32:47 AM »

oh ya fk i've listened to this when u posted but forgot to rate

boi  10/10, sounds really chill    for the first 5 mins (as if no one had mentioned this xd)

btw no1 gives a shit about my rating but i love u yz
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« Reply #13 on: August 07, 2018, 10:59:25 AM »

oh ya fk i've listened to this when u posted but forgot to rate

boi  10/10, sounds really chill    for the first 5 mins (as if no one had mentioned this xd)

btw no1 gives a shit about my rating but i love u yz
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