[zepher2211]

I'm working on a memoir for class, it's not done this is a draft with the first to pages. But what do yuo think?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ti4wUxxQzbQQuw8kB9OLPKUHny94CNls7Z5mqVCUIRY/edit?hl=en&authkey=CK7hmOQM

[Jeffalo13]

Any way I could edit it for you ?

[zepher2211]

Kinda personal thing lol tell me what you think should be changed, I know my verb tense needs to be changed to all present tense.

[Surgeypurgey]

I don't see anything. All I see is just a sign up page or a sign in page

[zepher2211]

You might have to sign in to a google acc to see it iunno

[Insaniity]

To lazy to read o.o Lol.

[thugzy]

My brother go to bed after dinner, while I act like I'm going to bed, but I don't, I've been an insomniac since I was five, a nice side effect of long nights in the hospital.

"goes"

[Xrow]

Let Jeff edit it, lol. Your grammar is terrible. Good storyline from what I read, though.

[zepher2211]

gimme a break I wrote it off the top of my head and haven't edited it at all >.<