(http://sadpanda.us/images/775239-BXQEZEA.png)
Need to know what's bad with it
y so negative???
u should be asking whats good about it ;)
im not gonna cnc this since i only point out major flaws, and i dont think u have any of those...
1) Bad blend.
2) No focus
Overall Ill give it 4.5/10
@ pig - know mistakes + training =i mprovement :)
@Leki - I purposely blurred out the render to give it a sorta 'dreamy' effect to it, guess it didn't work out that well. At first the pink lines on his right arm was covering his entire right side body, I erased some to get some flow. I didn't work on blending that much
colors are off, try using the same color next time for the central light/focus.
Your render is ...bad, try to pick one w/o demented proportion i.e. his nose/face.
It also looks like.. you sharpened it a bit too much. Don't abuse that bottom next time. ;)
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 14, 2011, 01:05:16 AM
colors are off, try using the same color next time for the central light/focus.
Your render is ...bad, try to pick one w/o demented proportion i.e. his nose/face.
It also looks like.. you sharpened it a bit too much. Don't abuse that bottom next time. ;)
I used colors which match with the background. I don't quite get what you mean by oversharpening the bottom. I sharpened the sig, then erased the sharpening over the render.
Btw what is demented?
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 01:27:58 AM
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 14, 2011, 01:05:16 AM
colors are off, try using the same color next time for the central light/focus.
Your render is ...bad, try to pick one w/o demented proportion i.e. his nose/face.
It also looks like.. you sharpened it a bit too much. Don't abuse that bottom next time. ;)
I used colors which match with the background. I don't quite get what you mean by oversharpening the bottom. I sharpened the sig, then erased the sharpening over the render.
Btw what is demented?
sorry, i misspelled button* I'm talking about the color of the light thing, (the pink and white) shining lights. You might need to blend that thing a little better than that so it'll flow. Overall; the right and left side doesn't match at all. Just doesn't work.
Fix the right side's light to be that of the white/purple one of the left.
*Demented: disproportional. You see how that.. assasin greed(?) render --his face? It's a bit weird, his eyes and his nose is just off. Plus if you pick that render, the light should just be coming from one side of his body. It shouldn't be from both.
ugh, my internet is dying..
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 14, 2011, 02:26:41 AM
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 01:27:58 AM
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 14, 2011, 01:05:16 AM
colors are off, try using the same color next time for the central light/focus.
Your render is ...bad, try to pick one w/o demented proportion i.e. his nose/face.
It also looks like.. you sharpened it a bit too much. Don't abuse that bottom next time. ;)
I used colors which match with the background. I don't quite get what you mean by oversharpening the bottom. I sharpened the sig, then erased the sharpening over the render.
Btw what is demented?
sorry, i misspelled button* I'm talking about the color of the light thing, (the pink and white) shining lights. You might need to blend that thing a little better than that so it'll flow. Overall; the right and left side doesn't match at all. Just doesn't work.
Fix the right side's light to be that of the white/purple one of the left.
*Demented: disproportional. You see how that.. assasin greed(?) render --his face? It's a bit weird, his eyes and his nose is just off. Plus if you pick that render, the light should just be coming from one side of his body. It shouldn't be from both.
ugh, my internet is dying..
Oh.....thanks for the CnC Yoshi. I think I will start over now :)
Contrast. The render could be less blended or better blended.
Quote from: Leki on December 14, 2011, 12:44:52 AM
1) Bad blend.
2) No focus
Overall Ill give it 4.5/10
you should only be rating people based on their skill level brah
Yea I agree with Yoshi, it looks like you sharpened too much. Ummm, could've at least added a text, and it's not thoroughly blended. Nice try though.
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
Better in some ways but now you've made the render to unclear
Cnc-The second one is too bright too boring on the right but not bad
@muncay hey when are u getting on?
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
What's with al the empty space?
Also, follow tutorials. Dey iz well good.
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
Better than the old. Look up some tuts :)
Quote from: qwerasdf2453 on December 14, 2011, 07:20:52 PM
Cnc-The second one is too bright too boring on the right but not bad
@muncay hey when are u getting on?
this weekend
i suggest you to find a better render. :) Nice try though, practice makes perfect so just keep on swimming trying.
Quote from: antisickness on December 14, 2011, 07:22:17 PM
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
What's with al the empty space?
Also, follow tutorials. Dey iz well good.
wut u mean by 'dey iz well good'. Explain yerself son
I guess I still need to follow some more tuts. The last time I followed one was about 1 month ago...
Quote from: tanqq on December 15, 2011, 02:34:55 AM
Quote from: antisickness on December 14, 2011, 07:22:17 PM
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
What's with al the empty space?
Also, follow tutorials. Dey iz well good.
wut u mean by 'dey iz well good'. Explain yerself son
I guess I still need to follow some more tuts. The last time I followed one was about 1 month ago...
He meant tutorials are good for you. Good for your gfx'ing soul.
Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 15, 2011, 02:52:51 AM
Quote from: tanqq on December 15, 2011, 02:34:55 AM
Quote from: antisickness on December 14, 2011, 07:22:17 PM
Quote from: tanqq on December 14, 2011, 04:45:42 AM
I think the new version is even worse than the old...
(http://sadpanda.us/images/775692-FT22L44.png)
What's with al the empty space?
Also, follow tutorials. Dey iz well good.
wut u mean by 'dey iz well good'. Explain yerself son
I guess I still need to follow some more tuts. The last time I followed one was about 1 month ago...
He meant tutorials are good for you. Good for your gfx'ing soul.
lolk
honestly the second one is better than the first imo. second one actually has some sense of flow and depth but they both lack some extra 'oomph' with all that empty space :/