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Other => GFX => Topic started by: Experiences on January 15, 2014, 09:12:59 PM

Title: Signature.
Post by: Experiences on January 15, 2014, 09:12:59 PM
I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/288xczs.png)
CnC please.  :)
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: DevilzDemise on January 15, 2014, 09:14:16 PM
Quote from: Experiences on January 15, 2014, 09:12:59 PM
I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/288xczs.png)
CnC please.  :)

hmm.. my heart says yes my mind says no. (if i'm putting it into two perspectives). Can't judge though as couldnt' do better myself, but i do like it. gj :) Something doesn't seem right, maybe because of the background not sure what it is..
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Selene on January 15, 2014, 09:15:55 PM
It doesn't look done.
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Cooky on January 15, 2014, 09:44:43 PM
Quote from: Selene on January 15, 2014, 09:15:55 PM
It doesn't look done.
I kinda agree
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: -PeaceLover- on January 15, 2014, 10:03:17 PM
Disgusting.
jk
it needs work, idk it just doesnt look good try adding some c4d lol
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: opuiq3 on January 15, 2014, 10:40:53 PM
I think it looks good  :)

Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: spiderstar on January 15, 2014, 10:46:13 PM
Needs to be toned down.
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: mo9 on January 16, 2014, 12:07:25 AM
Quote from: Experiences on January 15, 2014, 09:12:59 PM
I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:
(http://i43.tinypic.com/288xczs.png)
CnC please.  :)
hmm , alright soo i like tho flow it's pretty good imo
depth is okay , lighting is bad
there isnt much blending tho

imo if you fix lighting and blend the render with the bg + some gradient maps and colour filters +fix the contrast it would look amazing
great job thoi , you're improving
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Meteor on January 16, 2014, 04:11:22 PM
Looking good but it needs some more work.
If I'm not mistaken you told me you're using a tut for it, right? Have this in mind going forward; don't follow tuts 100%. Add some touches of your own, skip some stuff from the tut, etc.
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: qolderman on January 16, 2014, 04:26:58 PM
Quote from: Selene on January 15, 2014, 09:15:55 PM
It doesn't look done.
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Experiences on January 16, 2014, 04:28:47 PM
Thank you all for the advices, I tried some of it and ended up with this:
http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726 (http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726)
Is this better?
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: qolderman on January 16, 2014, 04:33:49 PM
Quote from: Experiences on January 16, 2014, 04:28:47 PM
Thank you all for the advices, I tried some of it and ended up with this:
http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726 (http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726)
Is this better?

Still looks not done to me ;/
But it's good tho
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Bombz on January 16, 2014, 06:54:35 PM
not that bad  :o
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: ghostkid17 on January 17, 2014, 12:25:12 AM
Not bad, you're getting a lot better
Title: Re: Signature.
Post by: Eat4two on January 17, 2014, 05:52:33 AM
If we compare this with your prior tag it's a major improvement, keep going.