[Experiences]

I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:

CnC please. 

[DevilzDemise]

I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:

CnC please.  

hmm.. my heart says yes my mind says no. (if i'm putting it into two perspectives). Can't judge though as couldnt' do better myself, but i do like it. gj Something doesn't seem right, maybe because of the background not sure what it is..

[Selene]

It doesn't look done.

[Cooky]

It doesn't look done.

I kinda agree

[-PeaceLover-]

Disgusting.
jk
it needs work, idk it just doesnt look good try adding some c4d lol

[opuiq3]

I think it looks good 

[spiderstar]

Needs to be toned down.

[mo9]

I decided to follow a sig tut and here is the result:

CnC please. 

hmm , alright soo i like tho flow it's pretty good imo
depth is okay , lighting is bad
there isnt much blending tho

imo if you fix lighting and blend the render with the bg + some gradient maps and colour filters +fix the contrast it would look amazing
great job thoi , you're improving

[Meteor]

Looking good but it needs some more work.
If I'm not mistaken you told me you're using a tut for it, right? Have this in mind going forward; don't follow tuts 100%. Add some touches of your own, skip some stuff from the tut, etc.

[qolderman]

It doesn't look done.

[Experiences]

Thank you all for the advices, I tried some of it and ended up with this:
http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726
Is this better?

[qolderman]

Thank you all for the advices, I tried some of it and ended up with this:
http://gyazo.com/0996498130d2e3327a3f1d385b666726
Is this better?

Still looks not done to me ;/
But it's good tho

[Bombz]

not that bad 

[ghostkid17]

Not bad, you're getting a lot better

[Eat4two]

If we compare this with your prior tag it's a major improvement, keep going.