v1
(http://sadpanda.us/images/331839-ETQDZ5M.png)
v2
(http://sadpanda.us/images/331841-NMLE478.png)
V2
v2
Mk, thx.
V1
Now I'm confused..
v1 is better since you can focus on the render more than the brightness of c4ds in v2
I say V2
v1, v2 blows.
But this makes me feel like you're copying Salanos.
To me it looks more blended in v2 but smudgin looks bad in both
V2 looks better to me, since it has a more 'complete' look, but I think you need to temper the lighting and make it overall more consistent. I would've shifted the composition to the right a bit as well, perhaps shrunk the canvas as well.
The text probably would've done better to the direct right of meido-Miku's face.
Lower end could use some blending, but you also need a bit more distinction on the upper end because it's harder to pick her out from V2.
Last suggestion, blur the edges of the smudging.
And I didn't know this image was rendered... Unless you did the cutting.
Quote from: NoS on January 04, 2011, 06:45:42 AM
V2 looks better to me, since it has a more 'complete' look, but I think you need to temper the lighting and make it overall more consistent. I would've shifted the composition to the right a bit as well, perhaps shrunk the canvas as well.
The text probably would've done better to the direct right of meido-Miku's face.
Lower end could use some blending, but you also need a bit more distinction on the upper end because it's harder to pick her out from V2.
Last suggestion, blur the edges of the smudging.
And I didn't know this image was rendered... Unless you did the cutting.
lol your too smart for me
Quote from: NoS on January 04, 2011, 06:45:42 AM
V2 looks better to me, since it has a more 'complete' look, but I think you need to temper the lighting and make it overall more consistent. I would've shifted the composition to the right a bit as well, perhaps shrunk the canvas as well.
The text probably would've done better to the direct right of meido-Miku's face.
Lower end could use some blending, but you also need a bit more distinction on the upper end because it's harder to pick her out from V2.
Last suggestion, blur the edges of the smudging.
And I didn't know this image was rendered... Unless you did the cutting.
I did the cutting. And I see what you mean but I'm not gonna do much more editing to it. You see, if I did what you recommended, it would be as if the sig was partially yours since some of it was your idea. I like sigs belonging to 1 person and 1 person only ;).
Quote from: Allie on January 04, 2011, 05:30:33 AM
v1, v2 blows.
But this makes me feel like you're copying Salanos.
Lolno, I'm not copying Salanos. It's just there are another couple of million people out there who <3 Vocaloids.
Quote from: kev453 on January 05, 2011, 01:59:07 AMI did the cutting. And I see what you mean but I'm not gonna do much more editing to it. You see, if I did what you recommended, it would be as if the sig was partially yours since some of it was your idea. I like sigs belonging to 1 person and 1 person only
I can has?
And I don't think it's necessarily a bad thing for you to use others' ideas, especially if the ideas are given for the sig involved in question.
Quote from: kev453 on January 05, 2011, 01:59:07 AMLolno, I'm not copying Salanos. It's just there are another couple of million people out there who <3 Vocaloids.
<3
But on the other hand I kind of see what Allie means, it's just the overall look of it.
Quote from: NoS on January 05, 2011, 07:09:58 AM
I can has?
And I don't think it's necessarily a bad thing for you to use others' ideas, especially if the ideas are given for the sig involved in question.
<3
But on the other hand I kind of see what Allie means, it's just the overall look of it.
http://sadpanda.us/images/334610-T1A458V.png - My rendering isn't that good >.>.
Oh, then sorry if you feel you've been copied, I had no intention of copying anyone's work.