Quote from: Eat4two on August 17, 2013, 10:26:35 AM
ya it's a gr8 movie
tried to cover up empty space when putting text tere, and text is not my strongest side so..
x/10? where's the beloved cnc!?! ![Huh? ???](https://boutcheetah.zylongaming.com/Smileys/fugue/huh.png)
that was a half-2-in-the-morning-I-cant-sleep-so-i'm-going-on-BC-forums post
here's your cnc:
using effects on renders = bad idea. It looks lq especially in parts where there's highlights and shadows like his jacket
when you make a b/w sig you only have your grey shades to work with. If you mess it up then it's gonna be a shambles.
The lens flare thing on his chest is really distracting, it really doesn't add to the composition
the smudge is ok. It's at its early stages and I can see it needs a lot of improvement but why did you blur it? don't blur your smudge dude cause it gives me the impression you didn't like it so you're covering it up. smudging is a detailed powerful technique that always hits you on first glance to make you think "yep this is a smudge". more often than not you'll actually be sharpening your smudges
don't try b/w till you can do colour smudge
4/10 I've seen better from you