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Started by Trustinme, December 31, 2011, 01:51:55 PM

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Trustinme

December 31, 2011, 01:51:55 PM Last Edit: January 01, 2012, 10:49:11 AM by Trustinme
here
Cnc please
rate it from 1/10 please thx






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tanqq

Your pentool is nice, but it doesn't fit with the flow or the sig. It also looks weird how vader wielded a lightsaber with no hands.

Overall I rate it a 4/10



Nucleaon

you missed one step with your pen tool, you're supposed to add an outer glow on it. Your best work none the less


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Delta

trust
that's really nice

Trustinme

ill edit the pen thing and the hand so it shows when i has time



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Meta

improvement but the render is lq, the font doesn't fit the sig, the bg and the effects stand out from each other, nice idead you had c:

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Trustinme

i improved the sig abit i still need to get better at texts need to find a good tut for sig placing and making any1 know where i can find please




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XenoPath

From that angle it looks like Darth has a lightsaber penis lol. No offense, its nice tho.




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Yoshi91

doesn't work to me the pen tool just sucks. Maybe try a smaller brush like size 1-2. Text is too hard to make out --should be lighter in color. Also erase or lower the opacity around the part where his left arm is holding the light saber so it wouldn't look too much like a penis.

4/10 :(

Trustinme

Quote from: Yoshi91 on December 31, 2011, 03:40:43 PM
doesn't work to me the pen tool just sucks. Maybe try a smaller brush like size 1-2. Text is too hard to make out --should be lighter in color. Also erase or lower the opacity around the part where his left arm is holding the light saber so it wouldn't look too much like a penis.

4/10 :(
made better backround
fixed the sword thing lol







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Yoshi91

Noice, noice. I like the second one w/o the humongous pen tool :)

spiderstar

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I give it a 3/10 cause it doesn't really blend and the pentool just looks out of place.

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