[Jonathan]

I like composing music in my spare time; this is one example of an assignment I had for a class:

Time

If you go to my YouTube channel, you can see a fragment of another song that I've recorded. (Fragment meaning I'm not done with it) Which "style" sounds better? Serious opinions please

[NeoKiller]

I like it.

Time > Peanuts Fo` Life imo.

[spiderstar]

I like composing music in my spare time; this is one example of an assignment I had for a class:

Time

If you go to my YouTube channel, you can see a fragment of another song that I've recorded. (Fragment meaning I'm not done with it) Which "style" sounds better? Serious opinions please

This sounds great! 
Do you have sheet music for this?  I would love to try and play it on my piano.

[antisickness]

Time is such a beautiful piece.    Boy, I've not felt so moved by a song in a while.
Keep up the damn good work. You deserve a pat on the back, lad.

[Cooky]

its good

I dont like the name though since one of my favorite songs is also named 'Time'

[zomniethe4]

its good

I dont like the name though since one of my favorite songs is also named 'Time'

Wouldn't that make you like the name then...

[Cooky]

Wouldn't that make you like the name then...

No

[Pokeh]

midi keyboard or real piano with soundboard?

[Jonathan]

Upright Yamaha Piano

[paranoia]

Not bad mate.

[Jonathan]

I like composing music in my spare time; this is one example of an assignment I had for a class:

Time

If you go to my YouTube channel, you can see a fragment of another song that I've recorded. (Fragment meaning I'm not done with it) Which "style" sounds better? Serious opinions please

This sounds great! 
Do you have sheet music for this?  I would love to try and play it on my piano.

I never really write it down. I memorize anything I compose..

Also, Peanuts Fo' Life isn't the actual title of that piece, and I'm going to be adding stuff to it.

[Archfiend]

Brilliant. I love it! As i always have loved the sound of a sweet piano, and this is beautiful.

Hope you keep up the good work