You should really cut down on the gradient maps. They're a bit too strong O_o
For that reason, I think the b/w version looks better.
Also, watch out for the placements. You wanna place them with reasoning, not just randomly.
Darken the edges a tad and add a light source. It really helps.
I think you've done better. Like the last one.
You're getting better at text, though.
Keep at it
