My constructive criticism:
If you have SV13 then why is your intro rendered super LQ in like 480p? It looks fuzzy and the styling is kinda weird.
Your video is like 30min, but why? Seeing that length watching the same thing and listening to the same kind of music makes me want to only watch like 10 seconds before i skip to the end. Cut out unnecessary portions aka waiting rooms, start screens, etc.
Add commentary if possible. Road to (insert name here). You're gonna wanna explain it because anyone knows you can mindlessly grind to any level.
Lastly why waste money on paying someone else to do it lmao. You can't even record the game in high def so unless youre using the game as a small feature it's going to look ghetto or stretched out. You could seriously learn how to make a decent intro and video content in like 1 hour as you've already got the programs.