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Optimism

July 07, 2011, 05:05:11 PM Last Edit: July 07, 2011, 07:05:10 PM by Optimism


CnC if you wish :).
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hawk5005

Don't like the background.
Text sucks.
:)

zomniethe4

Looks like you were trying to hard ._.

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mhj

the picture is to light and the text is to hard to spot.






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Optimism

The text is suppose to blend...

Wait, why did I ask for a CnC from this community?

\facepalm.
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Yz

I think you had it good but the very back layer got all Lq'd up, bland and unmatching, I'd recommend making it much less noticeable.. blend the BG with itself, y'know? :/

I don't see much of a prob. with the text apart from it not totally matching, otherwise that's probably the best spot you could have placed it aside from typical areas (corners, directly on render etc.) and is fine as it is, no more blend needed on that

C4ding the **** out of the render isn't good, it may look like its blending but its really not. You gotta use specific tools and brushes to make the render blend more than c4d's will, and c4d's are more for spread-effect not concentrated effect because otherwise the focal becomes too strong and becomes just a sig that basically is a big focal.

Back on blending; the render, where's the blend? Touch up the colors brah. You just see, to paste the render and then work AROUND it but the render needs lighting and crap to make it suit the sig as a whole.

And the bg should probably just be made much less visible so it doesn't draw the attention from the focal. Could go on but it's 5 am so hey yeah wow man.. in summary I like it and you didn't **** up in that many areas at all, it had more places you could have done better in that otherwise tho.. Just remember what I said on render lighting, it's much more important than it seems..

^ really crap 5 am rusty cnc
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I like the girl and the  bg.


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Optimism

Bounty, you're next in line for a sig.
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whats that orange thing on her boob ?
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LightRequiem

July 07, 2011, 06:22:42 PM #10 Last Edit: July 07, 2011, 06:23:38 PM by LightRequiem
wat dis?

^its the skin of her arm

Meta

Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 05:19:24 PM
Wait, why did I ask for a CnC from this community?

\facepalm.

not gonna say it in a douche way but that post ^ made you sound like the biggest asshole in this community (more than mmiicc0)





Optimism

July 07, 2011, 07:09:06 PM #12 Last Edit: July 07, 2011, 07:11:00 PM by Optimism
Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:07:26 PM
Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 05:19:24 PM
Wait, why did I ask for a CnC from this community?

\facepalm.

not gonna say it in a douche way but that post ^ made you sound like the biggest asshole in this community (more than mmiicc0)

Thats impossible :P.

Its no secret that this community lacks GFX ability, save a few (Tricky, Iri, mmico, Izy, dimon, etc [my opinion]). I made a mistake asking for a serious CnC from the entire community and simply pointed it out.
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Meta

leaving me n zom out ey? fien fku

true tho





Optimism

Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:12:37 PM
leaving me n zom out ey? fien fku

true tho

If you start actively making sigs again, then I'll include you. I thought you retired?
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Iridion

Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:07:26 PM
Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 05:19:24 PM
Wait, why did I ask for a CnC from this community?

\facepalm.

not gonna say it in a douche way but that post ^ made you sound like the biggest asshole in this community (more than mmiicc0)

ER NO

you should add a clear light somehwere (maybe its me, i love light effects) render stans out okay and there's some flow but bg kills everything good you made.
use fractals next time. :33


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Meta

Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 07:14:42 PM
Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:12:37 PM
leaving me n zom out ey? fien fku

true tho

If you start actively making sigs again, then I'll include you. I thought you retired?

ya, made a sig with ps, ****ing ugly D:





Optimism

mkay :O.

I thought I'd play it daring and attempt to use that bg D:.
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iwasbobo

Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 07:14:42 PM
Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:12:37 PM
leaving me n zom out ey? fien fku

true tho

If you start actively making sigs again, then I'll include you. I thought you retired?

People don't have to be making sigs in order to give a good opinion about them. >_>



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Optimism

Quote from: iwasbobo on July 07, 2011, 07:28:25 PM
Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 07:14:42 PM
Quote from: Meta on July 07, 2011, 07:12:37 PM
leaving me n zom out ey? fien fku

true tho

If you start actively making sigs again, then I'll include you. I thought you retired?

People don't have to be making sigs in order to give a good opinion about them. >_>

Again, you mistakenly take away the wrong message from my statements...

Meta is rusty. His prime is pwnsauce >.>. Starting to make sigs again = unrust.
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iwasbobo

^ I understood your statement just fine. Even though he's "rusty" at making sigs, he can still give knowledgeable comments and criticism.

Take a rusty PvPer for example. That PvPer still understands the concepts of the game, it's just he has difficulty carrying them out (in most cases, anyways).



Quote from: Pokeh'this is called the blockimus-glieicha, also known as the block glitch'

Meta

Quote from: iwasbobo on July 07, 2011, 08:37:38 PM
Take a rusty PvPer for example. That PvPer still understands the concepts of the game, it's just he has difficulty carrying them out (in most cases, anyways).

*looks at bobo* *remembers the time we pvp'd* *remembers the time i was learning*

-nods-





Optimism

Quote from: iwasbobo on July 07, 2011, 08:37:38 PM
^ I understood your statement just fine. Even though he's "rusty" at making sigs, he can still give knowledgeable comments and criticism.

Take a rusty PvPer for example. That PvPer still understands the concepts of the game, it's just he has difficulty carrying them out (in most cases, anyways).

IMO, his CnC isn't worth looking at given the simplistic basics I've had to explain to him in the past. No. If you want to take advice from him that is fine -- but I don't. He must get better for this to occur (keep practicing/learning new things).
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Meta

Quote from: Optimism on July 07, 2011, 08:46:42 PM
Quote from: iwasbobo on July 07, 2011, 08:37:38 PM
^ I understood your statement just fine. Even though he's "rusty" at making sigs, he can still give knowledgeable comments and criticism.

Take a rusty PvPer for example. That PvPer still understands the concepts of the game, it's just he has difficulty carrying them out (in most cases, anyways).

IMO, his CnC isn't worth looking at given the simplistic basics I've had to explain to him in the past. No. If you want to take advice from him that is fine -- but I don't. He must get better for this to occur (keep practicing/learning new things).

yep, this is when i agree with myself when i say your more of a asshole than mmiicc0, how about you follow wut he did, ragequit bc, went to deviantart forums, got "better" and came back ****ier than he already was when he left.

is he ur daddy or something, im sure he is, you both have the same type of ego.





zomniethe4

all newcoming gfx'ers do this shit
another reason y i stopped

Zom

Optimism

Quote from: zomniethe4 on July 07, 2011, 09:02:32 PM
all newcoming gfx'ers do this shit
another reason y i stopped

But I'm not new >.>.
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zomniethe4

you made one sig in the past

Zom

NoS

There are some who would say it looks nice, but those are probably because they haven't enough aesthetic sense to realize this is frankly pretty bad.
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 04:13:55 PM #29 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 04:32:13 PM by Optimism
Quote from: zomniethe4 on July 08, 2011, 03:55:40 PM
you made one sig in the past

lol...no.

Aesthetic sense, is ultimately, per individual, sir. Your Miku sigs are ugly (struggling depth and flow). My tastes simply differ. I'm sure you'd disagree :D.

Hopefully that brings the point home :).
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NoS

July 08, 2011, 04:43:26 PM #30 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 04:44:23 PM by NoS
Not surprised you'd try to pull that one out.

For someone who talks so much about pulling depth and flow, your implementations of them haven't been good.
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zepher2211

Changed your dimensions, sigs like that remind me of fat people.
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 04:49:11 PM #32 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 04:53:27 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 04:43:26 PM
Not surprised you'd try to pull that one out.

For someone who talks so much about pulling depth and flow, your implementations of them haven't been good.

So you agree opinions vary, with regard to aesthetic sense then? :P

Flow and depth are somewhat objective and remain external of "aesthetic perception"; i.e., your current signature lacks both flow with regard to render flow lines and depth [self-explanatory]. In addition to this, I deem it aesthetically sub-par >.>.

Both depth/flow can be objectively analyzed if one is educated in what to look for. The second, aesthetics, is always personal preference >.>. For example, you could have amazing depth/flow, but I may still consider the signature ugly ;p.
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NoS

You know what I feel is the problem. You seem too pretentious.
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zomniethe4

tell me y that is so true

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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 05:13:00 PM #35 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 05:14:49 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 05:08:20 PM
You know what I feel is the problem. You seem too pretentious.

Opinions vary, I suppose. If someone asks for a CnC, I'll try to analyze it without jumping to the conclusion that its ugly, i.e., looking for benchmark tools to gauge flow/depth. Also, if the focal has been preserved; other techniques to improve the sig (smudging for instance [maybe give some smudge settings for GIMP]), etc. Apologies for my expectations being higher for yourself, given your extensive history in the GFX community. If you find my corrective statements, pretentious, I can only say you've made an assumption of character and that this is not my intention.
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NoS

Read what you've just said and you'll see why I say so.

I have a history. That's exactly it. History. How often do you see me churning something out now.
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 05:18:43 PM #37 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 05:19:11 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 05:17:14 PM
Read what you've just said and you'll see why I say so.

I have a history. That's exactly it. History. How often do you see me churning something out now.

Then give some fairer/more appropriate analysis, and you won't find myself "correcting" you.

You have no one to blame but yourself for my "pretentious nature".
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zomniethe4


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NoS

Have you considered how little of what you've got there lines up with itself?
Colors are all over the spectrum; needlessly so, the background looks like some messy flux, with a spam of mess of C4Ds accounting for your blending. The text isn't 'blended', it's just intrusive.
Looking at this, if you're going to ask me, is like looking at a car that was built from several different cars and then plastered with multicolor decals.
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 05:29:31 PM #40 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 05:30:04 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 05:28:29 PM
Have you considered how little of what you've got there lines up with itself?
Colors are all over the spectrum; needlessly so, the background looks like some messy flux, with a spam of mess of C4Ds accounting for your blending. The text isn't 'blended', it's just intrusive.
Looking at this, if you're going to ask me, is like looking at a car that was built from several different cars and then plastered with multicolor decals.

This is what I expect from you.

I knew it'd be a risky tag. I wanted to try it :P.
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NoS

wonder who pulled this out
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 05:52:39 PM #42 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 05:54:03 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 05:33:40 PM
wonder who pulled this out


Donno but its bad >.>. LQ resources.
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NoS

Well, it's what you seem to be doing. And nothing was wrong with those resources.
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Allie

i think miku is secretly homosexual
does anyone else think so too?

NoS

Quote from: Allie on July 08, 2011, 06:15:32 PM
i think miku is secretly homosexual
does anyone else think so too?

depends on who's interpretation it is
so it's not unacceptable

4:20AM and I'm sick, I'm done
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Optimism

Quote from: Allie on July 08, 2011, 06:15:32 PM
i think miku is secretly homosexual
does anyone else think so too?

I do. I also think "she" is a transvestite >.>.
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NoS

how's an android a tranny anyway.
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Optimism

July 08, 2011, 06:27:34 PM #48 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 06:28:09 PM by Optimism
Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 06:26:10 PM
how's an android a tranny anyway.

How is an android hetero/homosexual anyway? Is it genderless?
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Allie

When did humans find out how to create androids anyway?

NoS

July 08, 2011, 06:31:30 PM #50 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 06:32:18 PM by NoS
9,001 and more interpretations, that's what she is
so you don't need to bother, what you say isn't going to bother me

the UGM phenomenom, see.


oh great it's already 04:30
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Optimism

Quote from: Allie on July 08, 2011, 06:28:47 PM
When did humans find out how to create androids anyway?

So wait, this thing isn't a real person?
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NoS

July 08, 2011, 06:33:35 PM #52 Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 06:34:54 PM by NoS
Quote from: Optimism on July 08, 2011, 06:31:42 PM
Quote from: Allie on July 08, 2011, 06:28:47 PM
When did humans find out how to create androids anyway?

So wait, this thing isn't a real person?

that depends on what you want to think

But she sings.
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Optimism

Quote from: NoS on July 08, 2011, 06:33:35 PM
Quote from: Optimism on July 08, 2011, 06:31:42 PM
Quote from: Allie on July 08, 2011, 06:28:47 PM
When did humans find out how to create androids anyway?

So wait, this thing isn't a real person?

that depends on what you want to think

Biologically living. I could always find some ho to play dress up...

Allie?
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NoS

I could explain, but I don't feel like doing that right now
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